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| RWBY News #33 | ![[X]Echoed Cries Icon_minitime](https://2img.net/i/fa/icon_minitime.gif) Tue Apr 21, 2015 2:45 am by Echo Valorient | Hello everyone!
It has been a while. I was hoping that I could make the site start up again by it's 1st birthday, but that didn't work out. Sorry for that.
We're moving! Instead of revamping the whole site, we are moving to a new one, this time on proboards. (I apologize in advance if you are trying to read a thread you participated in but found that it has been deleted) The new site is still under development. So, if you are interested and want to get more information on the site like the progress on that, just send a pm to me.
If you are looking for a thread or any threads had been deleted, just send me a pm as well.
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Ghost Echo
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![[X]Echoed Cries Left_bar_bleue](https://2img.net/i/fa/i/left_bar_bleue.jpg)  ![[X]Echoed Cries Empty_bar_bleue](https://2img.net/i/fa/i/empty_bar_bleue.jpg)  (100/100)
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|  Subject: [X]Echoed Cries Sun Oct 05, 2014 5:22 pm | |
| Weapon Name: Echoed Cries Weapon Type: Pistol rifle combination Dust Type: Yellow Weapon Appearance: It has 2 forms. It's two separate pistols, but when combined form a sniping rifle. When barrel is connected to butt, they form a single sniping rifle, scoped capable of single shot long range attacks. Weapon Functions: As pistols, they become semi-automatic burst shot midrange weapons. Typically ranging from 0 to 10 meters. When formed into a rifle, it's capable of becoming an assassin's long range best friend capable of shooting up to 250 meters. The weapon's ammunition clip holds the dust, which is typically yellow. More or less, becoming a volatile piercing projectile. It's ammunition chamber holds 6 vials of dust, each vial holds about 25 rounds of yellow dust. effectively boasting a 150 round weapon before the weapon needs to be reloaded. Attacks: [Two free attacks--Extra: 200 lien] - Ragnarok:
Type:Area of effect/Single
Description:When used in pistol form, it condenses all the dust in the ammunition chamber into a single attack, becoming a high powered scatter shot, ranging accurately up to 15 meters. Each bullet explodes, generating an electric current, when they explode simultaneously it causes a stun field if the currents connect. In rifle form, it takes all the dust and turns it into one high voltage shot, if it doesn't incapacitate the target, they're likely unconscious.
The pistol's range tends to be 15 meters, in sniping rifle form, it can range up to nearly half a mile before losing charge.
Advantages: It's a good finisher, and almost always used as a last resort.
Disadvantages: She has to reload her weapon, two post reload.
- Tachyon Burst:
Type:Single target
Description:In pistol mode: Instead of creating a scatter shot, she's capable of using each weapons charge as an arrow of sorts, single shots capable of piercing anything cloth-like, mortally wounding someone with a frail aura. In rifle mode, it allows the rifle to launch rapid fire steady streams of yellow dust, useful to stun, paralyze or incapacitate the targets. Not so much focused to pierce as it's pistol form.The pistol gains more range, in the form of single shots, it's range becoming nearly 25m. The sniping rifle sacrifices range for rapid fire momentum, nearing 150 meters. It also becomes much less accurate.
Advantages: It's another coup de grace, although it's much less powerful.
Disadvantages: It consumes dust quickly, limited use and requires a two post minimum reload time.
Last edited by Echo Valorient on Tue Mar 10, 2015 5:50 pm; edited 7 times in total (Reason for editing : deleted pictures.) | |
| | | | Yu Leigenma
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| | Subject: Re: [X]Echoed Cries Sun Oct 05, 2014 5:39 pm | |
| Tachyon Dragon, omg YUS!! I wuv it!! | |
| | | | Aeryn Dais
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| | Subject: Re: [X]Echoed Cries Fri Oct 10, 2014 10:50 am | |
| Hello, looking over your app.
You have two dust types and three functions.
Seems a bit overboard for starting out you weapon and it is highly recommended that you get rid of a dust type, or a weapon function.
The owner of the site, James Gray, also has a rule of having two dust types=no more upgrades.
Just a thought you should keep lingering in your mind.
For your attacks, ragnorok, is too op. "Cutting through nearly any material" Also, the range is too high for an attack like that, I would suggest you tone it down a bit.
I have noticed you use things like "unblockable" making the attack too op. If this was pvp, it would be unfair for others. | |
| | | | Ghost Echo
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| | Subject: Re: [X]Echoed Cries Fri Oct 10, 2014 3:31 pm | |
| The rifle form was meant to be a sniping rifle. Not assault. Or are ranged weapons of that distance not allowed? | |
| | | | Aeryn Dais
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| | Subject: Re: [X]Echoed Cries Fri Oct 10, 2014 7:08 pm | |
| oh my bad. the range is fine. the other stuff isn't.
also, it's a bit confusing how you can combine your pistols to create the rifle. I understand you make it butt to butt, but that would be two openings on each end. | |
| | | | Ghost Echo
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| | Subject: Re: [X]Echoed Cries Fri Oct 10, 2014 11:19 pm | |
| Barrel to butt. Butt to butt was the sword.
I edited it quite a bit, and got rid of the sword altogether. Hopefully it doesn't seem less focused.
Also changed the form of dust i was using. | |
| | | | Echo Valorient
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| | Subject: Re: [X]Echoed Cries Sun Oct 12, 2014 8:09 pm | |
| Hello Ghost Echo, I think you forgot to edit the Dust type as it still says white and red while you listed yellow throughout everything else. Because it is an easy edit that I expect will be done, | |
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